Scenes 32-37

There are a couple things that I see now that I want to fix. In the first scene I should probably pull away the camera so that the bana doesn’t look like it’s sitting on the bottom of the TV screne. The second fix would be in the transition from the lower view of just their feet walking to their whole bodies walking forawrd. They seem to be walking faster when showing just their feet. Also when showing their whole bodies-I want to emphasize the pouting more by maybe throwing their heads back while taking the deep breath in. I also need to play with the peg for making the bana fall or draw it so it feels better in the last scene. Also his reaction to the bana hitting his head was too delayed. I do like the difference of havig the characters shaded grey so that they stick out more. But I was thinking maybe I should have the night scenes color cards shaded grey because now you can’t even really tell when it’s night. I am getting used to the process and feel that the scenes are looking a little better (from when I started) so I think the fixing up process should take less time and I will be more efficient without having to worry so much about the technical side.

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